Poem: Friends?

Poem: Thank You For Opening Up My Eyes

Thank you for opening up my eyes
And now I see through your disguise
You just shattered  my trust
And all of it turned to dust...
 
The bittersweet taste on the tongue
Of disappointment will last long
I didn't know all your fears
And I believed all your tears…
 
However, I was just wrong…
For the millionth time I'll be strong
I won't let it get me down
Even tho I gave you my crown...
 
 Was it really all worth it?
I don't understand what happened...
I don't understand what you think
What's with that glass of frustration I drink
 
 Even tho my eyes now are open
The situation doesn't sink in
Were you really my friend?
With true love that comes from within?

 

2/3,5/12

by Bodkhisattva

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Comments (1)

  1. riptorn

    Hey! My offer of friendship was no so-called! I would say it was iffy, at best..….liked the way you penned this, if not the sentiment

    February 04, 2013
    1. bodkhisattva

      February 04, 2013
  2. alcom

    hmm…

    February 05, 2013
    1. bodkhisattva

      Mhm.

      February 05, 2013
  3. iwilldowhatiwant

    do u write all the poems u post?

    February 11, 2013
    1. bodkhisattva

      Yes, after each poem there's a date at the end and my nick-name stating it's by me. ;-)

      February 11, 2013
      1. iwilldowhatiwant

        thts so cool. ur a REALLY good writer

        February 20, 2013
        1. bodkhisattva

          *blush* Thank you!

          February 20, 2013
  4. conch1969

    Love and live happy. The poem is significant and happiness personified. The mode of the poem is for the visits of http://www.writessays.biz/ good and enduring. The suggested forms of the happiness are linked for the gladness.

    November 08, 2016