Poem: Don't Give Up On Me

Poem: Don't Give Up On Me

Poem: Don't Give Up On Me

Don't Give Up On Me

Please, don't you give up on me
I am sorry... That I am still lost...
 But you know, how frustrating it can be
Just feeling yourself as a ghost...

Yes, you told me a while ago
All about your feelings, sincerely...
But somehow, I just can't go with a flow
At the same time I hold you so dearly...

I know that you need to move on
If you can't get something more
But I so don't want you to be gone
And not to see you anymore...

Yes, may be I'm selfish...
Yes, may be unfair and cold...
But I know that you always will cherish
The girl that you met long ago...

Thank you my friend for all the emotions
'Cuz you know,  I can feel too...
But if you give up: there'll start the explosions
That'll destroy the bond between two

So please, don't you give up
Please, friend, stay with me...
Hold my hand close to your heart
And then, one day, we'll be happy

9/11/12
by Bodkhisattva

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Comments

  1. Mom-Nest

    Lovely and heart moving. Mama C

    September 11, 2012
    1. bodkhisattva

      Thank you, C.

      September 11, 2012
  2. cjb321

    Beautiful. Thank you. smiles

    September 11, 2012
    1. bodkhisattva

      Thank you, CJ. smiles back

      September 11, 2012
  3. Somnium

    I know the feeling of not being able to give more but not wanting to let go at the same time. Nice poem… true feelings. Thanks for sharing

    September 11, 2012
    1. bodkhisattva

      Yes… And it is something sad to realize… sighs Thank you, Somni.

      September 12, 2012
  4. celeronpaigesrocketmail

    That quote is just amazing ..

    September 12, 2012
    1. bodkhisattva

      It is good, indeed. ;3

      September 12, 2012
      1. celeronpaigesrocketmail

        :3 Indeed . I had reposted yer post just now with some more of Mitch Albom as I had never heard of him before until now .. in response of ure post .. and so no Bod I would never give up u not ever, no

        September 12, 2012
        1. bodkhisattva

          Oooh, Cele!!!

          September 12, 2012
          1. celeronpaigesrocketmail

            he he he

            September 12, 2012
            1. bodkhisattva

              September 12, 2012
  5. Nightsong

    So moving, so heartbreaking, so real and bittersweet for me to read this… Thank you for writing

    November 16, 2012
    1. bodkhisattva

      Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.

      November 18, 2012